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I have a appt by model audition open at 7 30 tonight.?

Hello, I want to know if I am wrong grammar, this model application and please help me make a clear good sense on the grammar on model application. model have a question saying: Please write a brief statement on how u think john casablancas modeling and career center can benefit you. Your answer will be used to evaluate your level of commitment and admission to the center. My answer : I am very friendly and love outgoing always and I'm unquie very much also I have way the valuable who I am. I love a hobby thing I love take picture of myself who I am. I always a enjoyful and I have alot love to help people. I want a successful a role deaf for a model there will look at deaf model that can do it.my goal is not give up in my dream to be come true

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1. LEARN HOW TO SPEAK ENGLISH!
2. My answer : I am very friendly and outgoing. I'm very unique and I value who I am as a person. My favorite hobby is to take pictures of myself and this shows who I am. Helping people is something I always enjoy and love. I want to become a successful deaf model and a role model for others. My goal is not give up on my dreams and make them come true. I hope this helps. I'm not sure if this is what you were going for.
3. Yo Pinky The modeling business is a Big part of my career (certified model consultant for many years) and, I am happy to hear that you are going for this if it is your dream !! From your statements -- I see that you are deaf --- and, you are to be commended for doing well WITH words in spite of this MAJOR hurdle -- for I know that words are difficult when you have this to deal with !! BUT-- that said -- you definitely need to have your statements --- restated -- for they have strong message to them but are somewhat "dangling" in directness and clarity !! SO --- Here goes --- hope I keep YOUR meanings in with the way I do this !! I am a very friendly, loving, outgoing individual with a good self-image ! I am a joyful person who loves to help people ! My hobby is doing photos of myself and I really enjoy it very much. I would love to be a successful model AND as a deaf individual be a role model for others in this endeavor -- this is my dream -- I want it to come true -- I will not give up on this ! I feel that the John Casablancas center can definitely help me make this dream a reality and I am Very ready to learn the things that they can teach me here !! I am ready to work very hard to make this happen !! Notice the little "tag" at the end of what I've written that wasn't included in YOUR statement -- this was because the original idea FOR this statement was to write --- how you think the center can benefit you !! All the best to you, sweetness, and I am very proud of you for making this attempt to learn and to go forward with your dream --- to ME -- you already ARE a role model for deaf youngsters --- for you are following your dream and not letting your differences make impossibilities !!! The Best of Luck to You See you in the Fashion Shows !!!!!!!!