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I have a model audition open at 7:30 pm tonight!!?
Hello, I want to know if I am wrong grammar, this model application and please help me make a clear good sense on the grammar on model application. model have a question saying: Please write a brief statement on how u think john casablancas modeling and career center can benefit you. Your answer will be used to evaluate your level of commitment and admission to the center. My answer : I am very friendly and love outgoing always and I'm unquie very much also I have way the valuable who I am. I love a hobby thing I love take picture of myself who I am. I always a enjoyful and I have alot love to help people. I want a successful a role deaf for a model there will look at deaf model that can do it.my goal is not give up in my dream to be come true.
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- this would be better: I am very friendly and love to meet new people. I am always outgoing and people that meet me say I'm unique. My self-confidence is also very high and carry myself well. I enjoy photography and helping people. My ultimate goal is to become a role model for other deaf women. I will not give up until I have reached this goal.
- Write something more like this: I think John Casablancas modeling and career center can benefit me as I want to be a succesful role model for the deaf. I am very friendly and outgoing and love to have pictures taken of myself. This would be my dream come true!
- Ok, I changed some things around to try to make it better. And I tried to use as much of yours words as I could. I think I done pretty good at least if I am reading and understanding what you are trying to say. Hope this helps. I'm unique in the way that I value who I am. I'm always outgoing and a very friendly and loving person. I love taking pictures and enjoy photography as a hobby. I love helping others, it truely fills my heart with joy. I am deaf and dream for the chance to become a model. My dream is to make my goal of becoming a model come true.
